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27 May 2011 @ 12:19 pm
The Night it Rained Fire  

The Night It Rained Fire
Words: 1,357
Rating: PG
Summary: Rikku's memories of the night that Gippal left Bikanel to join the Crimson Squad.

justhavefaith on June 1st, 2011 02:58 pm (UTC)
what a beautiful but sad story ....
icecubey_feruicecubey_feru on June 15th, 2011 03:21 am (UTC)
So wonderful! Truly well written and very haunting. I loved the repetition and the prose you used. You found a great key phrase to use throughout the story. Length was good too. Well-done!!