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08 October 2010 @ 11:33 am
More Rippal!  
This community needs more life!!! So... I've posted this!

Title: Promise
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: Rikku and Gippal reveal their intentions on fighting Sin to each other


Enjoy!

http://icicle-streams.livejournal.com/953.html
(I've linked this to the post on my journal to save time and effort on my part ;D)




Btw, any opinions or constructive crit?
 
 
 
annaiese on October 8th, 2010 03:18 am (UTC)
awww this was so cute!
Alainawild_green_eyes on October 8th, 2010 04:47 am (UTC)
aww...if I may quote Despicable Me: "IT'S SO FLUFFY!" ^_^ I love it, so sweet. and it's great that you brought in elements from both FFX and X-2: Rikku trying to halt Yuna's pilgrimage in X, and what we find out after the fact in X-2 about Gippal joining the Crimson Squad. great inspiration for it, too. pretty much a great job all around! ^_^
Nicolelady_nicole on October 8th, 2010 06:24 am (UTC)
Wonderful! Great job!

Yay, this comm isn't dead! <3
icicle_streamsicicle_streams on October 8th, 2010 09:54 am (UTC)
Thanks for your replies! I'm so glad this comm isn't dead, and you guys replied so quickly too! Right now I'm addicted to FFX-2! I started a new game two days ago and I keep getting different inspiration to write for our favourite couple! :D

justhavefaith on October 11th, 2010 03:41 pm (UTC)
I read this on fanfiction and I can't remember if I gave a comment on it or not :$
but I think it is very sweet. But now we need a story why he didn't marry her :p:p
icicle_streamsicicle_streams on October 12th, 2010 09:37 am (UTC)
@ Justhavefaith
Oh my gosh, I didn't think of that!!! Now I need to figure out why he didn't marry her... hmm...that sounds like a good idea for a story! :)

Thanks for the comment, and the story idea!
justhavefaith on October 12th, 2010 03:38 pm (UTC)
you're welcome :p
icecubey_feruicecubey_feru on October 12th, 2010 04:22 pm (UTC)
A surprising retreat into WAFF :] I'm glad you started the ball of life rolling again in this comm; I've been thinking about some one-shots I could write. Stories like this are a pretty big departure from the vibe I get from these characters in X-2, so I think it definitely gets points for originality, but I'd also ask myself questions, like someone else mentioned, about how it factors into what we know about where these characters end up. Clearly, Rikku and Gippal have a much more distant relationship in X-2 than a couple that promised to marry each other. I'd submit that as a suggestion about where you can go from here :O
Jezzitofadeawayagain on October 13th, 2010 05:46 pm (UTC)
Really sweet, I enjoyed it... the only thing I didn't particularly understand were the hesitations such as "I'm, I'm" - not to say I didn't understand it, but I think they could have been denoted a bit better. I wasn't sure if it was a gathering-courage sort of pause, or some other kind of pause, you know? But other than that, great job!